Thursday, December 27, 2012

Nature Portfolio Assignment

Man´s Best Friend

They said it wasn’t possible to buy loyalty.
They said it was impossible to buy love.
“Wrong,” I said.
Because it was given to me
In just one small package.                                                    [5]
Man´s best friend.
She’s part of my family,
Like a sister in fact.
She´s there every time,
Whether they’re the bad times or the good;                         [10]
She’s there.
Man´s best friend.
She doesn´t talk back to me
When I chastise her.
She just listens.                                                                   [15]
Man´s best friend.
I always get that warm and fuzzy feeling
When I hug her.
Love, is what they call it.
Man´s best friend.                                                              [20]
She doesn’t complain or offend.
She just obeys commands and behaves.
Man´s best friend.
She welcomes me at the door
Every single day                                                                 [25]
Like if she waits next to the door
All ten and a half hours that I´m gone
Just for my arrival.
Man´s best friend.
And she appreciates everything little thing                            [30]
I give her no matter if it’s a pat on the back
Or a chew toy.
Her goal is to keep me happy.
You can tell by the way she’s always by my side.
Man´s Best friend.                                                             [35]
She never gets annoying.
Sometimes it feels like she knows me
More than I know myself.
She knows exactly when I need company
And when I need to be alone.                                             [40]
Man´s best friend.
She’s the whole package
She’s love,
Happiness,
Loyalty,                                                                             [45]
And my best friend.
Her name is Pekis.
And I wouldn’t trade
Her for anything.





The Most Beautiful Butterfly

It was December 24, 2011; right on the nick of time before Christmas; and my family and I were barley going to go buy our synthetic Christmas tree. We thought that the only trees left were going to be small and ugly but after hours of looking for a decent tree we found the perfect one for the special day. It was bright green and thick. The tree seemed as if it were glowing. We took it home and set it up. It was I who found something hiding from the light in the middle of the tree. It was a small cocoon. I had never experienced an actual live cocoon before. I had always seen them on TV and books but never in person. It was brown with a tint of boring gray. It was about an inch tall and about a centimeter and a half thick. The shape of it was so perfect and the way the layers were made it seem as if it were factory made. I was mesmerized and I didn’t tell anyone fearing that my parents would belabor the thought and think it wasn’t healthy to have in the house or that it was some alien creature.  
That night all I could think about was if there was something alive in there or dead and if whatever type off butterfly was in there was going to divulge itself sometime or not. I became very curious and started to get negative thoughts inside of my head. I thought to myself how a caterpillar could become a butterfly in the middle of winter in Chicago. Was it really possible for it to actually live? It wasn´t that long when till I got an answer.
It was the day after New Year’s Day and something magical had happened. It was a moment that I will never forget. I saw rebirth without it being actual birth.
I was sitting next to the Christmas tree texting some friends that day and a sudden crunchy noise had caught my attention. Without any emotions I looked towards the noise and saw the cocoon swinging a little. I felt my heart light up immediately to the thought that something beautiful was about to happen. The cocoon looked so thick and light at the same time and the butterfly seemed to be handling it so easily but taking its time. I just stood there watching it happen. I saw something black with yellow come out; it was a wing and then another. It happened so quickly as if this occurrence had flashed right before my eyes.  
It was inside the cocoon one second and the other it was on the tree starting to dry its wings. At first, it didn´t look like a butterfly. It looked like some weird alien looking creature with antennas. The wings were black with yellow and white dots on the edges. The butterfly closed her wings and they looked like owl eyes underneath. I had never seen such a perfect miracle like this one before. Beautiful, was the fact that I had a butterfly for a pet. I named it Hope.
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Terrifying Weather

It was the third time I had gone to Mexico and it was the middle of summer of 2004. I was companied by my grandparents, both my brothers, and 2 of my cousins. One would expect to have sunny, warm and simple beautiful weather in the summer especially in Mexico but it was the complete opposite that one night.
The day had started off like any other summer day: clear skies, birds chirping, the sound of children playing outside, and the sun shining bright.  I remember myself even lying under the sun just listening to my surroundings. Everything seemed normal and joyful.  Hours later, around 5 P.M., the skies suddenly became gray without a warning and I couldn’t even hear the sound of children playing or birds chirping. Thinking it was already late, I went inside to watch Spider-Man. I became aware that it was barley 5 shortly after and thought about it but didn’t think about it. It came to mind for about 2 seconds and then the thought of the sudden weather arrangement left my mind in hurry.
It began to rain pretty hard around 6 and all I thought was, “it’s just rain,” and, “wow this rain smell is inhalable.” I stood next to the window next to my bed for about 2 hours just watching the rain pour and pour nonstop. It was amazing how so much water could fall from the sky so quickly.  “I wonder why God is crying so much,” I asked myself and with that I fell into deep sleep along with my brothers and cousins.
I woke up 5 hours later in which felt like 5 minutes. I had been awoken by loud thunder. The only people in bed around me were one of my cousins and one of my brothers.  I figured they had gotten up before me. A large lightning bolt along with thunder struck close by. I jumped in fear and ran out of the room without looking back. Luckily, I bumped into my nine year old cousin. I had never been so happy to see him in my entire life. I hugged him tightly. He saw how frightened I was and walked me to my grandparents. They were both next to the door looking outside. They said that it had been years since a storm like this one had happened and how weird it was for it to have happened in the middle of summer.
I sat next to them and watched the rain pour down. It was about 4 or 5 inches of rain.  Never in my life have I seen so much rain. The rain didn’t give up; it still kept pouring like rain there would be no more.  Then lightening companied by thunder took part too. I would hear thunder from my left and see bright white and yellow and blue lightning come from the right. The lightning seemed to come out of nowhere. The skies were completely smoky black. It looked like the clear skies and sun had been captured and hidden forever without hope of them coming back.
I wondered if it was near its end. Then all of a sudden it was silent outside. There was neither thunder nor rain drops. Everything had vanished except for the dark and mysterious skies. Moments later something unexpected came from the sky. It looked like piece of ice or salt. Then another, and another, then lots of them fell from above. It was hail and it seemed completely fine at first because the hail came in bean sized pieces but then after a minute or so it came down harder. The roof sounded like it was being attacked by hundredths of crows one after the other. The hail got bigger. They hail pieces were as big as two grapes put together. Everyone in the house that was awake backed a foot away from the door. It came to the point where thre3 four inch hail pieces fell from the sky. They were the biggest I had ever seen before. Everything became silent again and then thunder once more. This time it was harder than ever. It was just thunder. All electricity wen away in a celerity after the hail stopped.  My grandma set up three candles. She held one, and put the other two across the room on opposite sides.  Everything was dark and barely visible thanks to the candles. Not even the moon light had a sign of existing at the moment. The thunder sounded like big bangs on bass drums. BOOM! The thunder lasted for another five minutes when I checked the time on my grandpa’s watch. It was 3 AM. I had spent another 2 hours staring outside and I was not sleepy whatsoever. I wasn’t sure if I wasn’t sleepy because I was scared, because of mother nature’s noise, or because I just wasn’t sleepy. But what I do know is that I had perfect timing. Right away when I looked up from looking at the watch an incendiary bright yellow bolt of lightning struck down right in front of me. It hit the guava tree and it caught on fire. It was one of the scariest things I had seen.  It happened so fast too. First I see darkness, then yellow and then fire. I was sad that the guava tree was on fire but fortunately it began to rain again. It caused the fire to fade out and the guava tree was fine. I was actually happy that the rain had come back.
After seeing all this excitement and experiencing new things about nature I became tired and sleepy. I showed off my expressions by yawning and asking my cousin to walk me to the room. As he did, I rested in bed and shut my eyes. I slowly heard the rain and thunder fade away slowly and before in knew it I was dreaming about being at the beach.
(992)






The Marbles
A long time ago before the earth became existent, there lived 3 kids. Their names were Sandra, Jack, and Daniel. They were close friends and coherent to each other. They all lived together in what one may call paradise. Everything was perfect and they had everything they needed. The flowers blossomed in bright colors, the skies always clear and sunny, the animals around them harmless, and they had ever kind of vegetable and fruit to keep them healthy and strong. Nothing ever went wrong as long as they obeyed their master, the great and powerful Manji. He had powers that nobody else had. He had a cane that was considered a talisman because it would grant any wish he with just thinking of it. The great and powerful Manji Koala only asked for them all to follow the rules in the cane book especially rule number 1, which was the most important rule of them all. Rule number 1 read, “Do not let anything in the shape of a sphere hit the Quenchi River.”
The Quenchi River was very popular to everyone. It was their water source and everyone visited the well-known river at least 5 times a day. The friendly trio liked to play marble games on a hill right over the Quenchi River and one day something happened that changed their lives forever. Sandra, Daniel, and Jack were playing with their marbles. They were competing with each other to see who could make their marble go into a dirt hole the fastest. Sandra defeated Jack and Daniel and without thinking about her location, she jumped up and down. The marbles were shook by her poundings and rolled down the hill. Jack noticed them and tried to accost the marbles. They were heading directly to the Quenchi River! Everyone that noticed the 9 marbles rolling downhill tried their best to try to catch up to them but it was no use. Two marbles had fallen into the water and Jack caught up to the third marble but just managed to touch it after hitting the water. All nine marbles finally hit the water and everything became silent. Then a flash of light came out of the water right where the marbles had fallen. The marbles levitated into midair and it seemed as if it was growing. Everyone watched in awe until the great and powerful Manji Koala climbed down his tree. He became furious when he saw what had happened. There was nothing he could do for a can rule had been broken. “You fools! Do you notice what you have all done? It is the end! There is nothing I can do now. We have created something that we cannot stop. We have created planets,” exclaimed the great and powerful Manjin Koala.
The marbles became ten times bigger than their size every second. Everyone began to panic and then all of a sudden the planets got to the point that they were so big that the knocked everyone off including the Great and Powerful Mangi Koala. They thought all hope was gone, that it was the end as they fell. Until suddenly the fell on the third marble that had fell into the Quenchi River. That planet was named Earth. The first was named mercury, the second, Mars, the third, Earth, the fourth, Venus, the fifth, Jupiter, the sixth, Saturn, the seventh, Uranus, the eighth, Neptune, and the ninth, Pluto. They were aligned exactly in the order they had fallen and they looked exactly how the marbles did and Earth became their new home.
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Narrative Responses

The Tide Rises, the Tide Falls
            When I first read this poem I thought that it literally meant that the tide rises and that then it falls as in it goes back and forth. When I read, “The little waves… efface the footprints in the sands-,” I thought about how when I go to the beach the tide gets rid of my footprints as well. It was after putting my book away when I realized I wasn’t looking at the actually picture. I was looking at the small pictures that lead to the big picture. I felt really dumb when I realized the tide signified time and how it does the same thing over and over again even if the traveler never comes back. I liked how Henry Wadsworth Longfellow describes the foam of the waves as white hands. They aren’t actual hands but it gives a small idea of a hand actually washing away the footprints as if they were never there. The actual message that this poem was trying to tell me was that nature goes on doing its daily routine even if there is no one there to watch it. Death is something that happens to everyone and you never return to life again but nature (the tide) will not stop for anyone.
(210)

Grass
            When I first saw the Grass poem without reading it, I noticed how short it was. I thought to myself, “Oh, man. I am definitely going to have trouble understanding this.” But at the end I was wrong. It took me a while but I actually understood the message of this poem. The message was that the grass is like a type of decoration to all the disasters that we humans have made. The grass is a part of nature that somehow repairs all of the scars made in battles. We forget about the fallen heroes of wars too easily. We forget about all the people that died in wars trying to fight for us and it’s is true. You don’t see people today caring about people that died in war 10 years ago from today. It’s like we forget about the battles of the past and the lessons from history. It’s the reason why we make the same mistakes over and over again. The reasons for those wars are the same as the ones we first started with. When Sandburg says, “Shovel them under and let me work,” I think about someone actually working on something. The grass is referred to as a person covering up the dead with green.
(211)

The Earth on Turtle’s Back
            The Earth on Turtle’s Back, by Michael Caduto and Joseph Bruchac, was my favorite story in the Prentice Hall Literature book so far. I enjoyed reading about how the world came to be by just seeds and dirt on a turtle’s back. Caduto and Bruchac used mostly personification and metaphors to make this Native American story. For example, earths cannot grow on turtle’s backs and animals of course cannot talk in actual life. I would think that any other person that would read this story would take it seriously and just understand what it says but not me. I thought that this story was actually pretty funny without intention. Like when the pregnant woman fell her “grasp slipped off the tip of the branch, leaving her with only a handful of seeds as she fell, down, down, down, down.” At that part I imagined her falling and screaming and then stopping her scream to grab seeds and then screaming again until the swans come to her. This story made my head come up with a little movie about it with some behind the scenes parts that the story didn’t say. The Earth on Turtle’s Back helped my imagination blossom. When the pregnant woman fell down into the hole, it reminded me of Alice from Alice in Wonderland because Alice also falls down into a hole and ends up in a small adventure with animals and other creatures.
(237)

When Grizzlies Walked Upright
            When Grizzlies Walked Upright and the Earth on Turtle’s Back, were similar because they were both myths and involved animals as having big parts in the stories. I found it cool how Erdoes and Alfonso Ortiz had the imagination to create When Grizzlies Walked Upright. They don’t just explain how bears became to walk on all fours, but they also explain how the trees, rivers, and animals were created. They use good imaginary as well. When they said, “So he carved a hole in the sky with a stone and pushed all the snow and ice down below… known as Mount Shasta,” and also when the writers say, “Get down on your hands and knees. You have wronged me, and from this moment all of you will walk on four feet and never talk again,” you can actually picture the Chief of the Sky Spirits doing that.  These ideas of course doesn’t exist and cannot possibly be possible because there is no such thing as carving into the sky or telling dangerous animals what to do and them actually doing what you say. When the Chief of the Sky Spirits orders the bears to walk on all four, it reminds me of a story my grandma told me when I was four. I can’t remember it very well but I remember her saying that snakes used to have two legs and that an important woman was on a donkey and that a snake got to close to the donkey and alarmed it to freak out and drop the woman. God got mad at the snakes and made their legs disappear and that’s why snakes undulate today.
(276)

Walden
            This narrative was my second favorite because although it was somewhat Thoreau’s imagination, it was realistic and meaningful. Thoreau focuses mostly on simplicity. I had never thought about simplicity before. In his perspective simplicity is just the things one needs in life. He keeps it simple. When he first moves into the cabin in the woods in the winter, I thought was crazy. I mean it’s fine to move into the woods but not when it is “merely a defense against the rain, without paltering or chimney; [when it has] the walls being of rough weather stained boards, with wide chinks, which make it cool at night.” I could just feel the freezing weather at night when I read that sentence. Living in the woods, Thoreau also says, “I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived.” By this I think he meant that he just wanted to live the simple life. He just wanted what he needed and not become selfish and dependent like others in the world. This was wise of him because he was generous but I would never be able to survive in the woods like that by myself without heaters and stoves. Later he says, “I left the woods for as good a reason as I went there. Perhaps it seemed to me that I had several more lives to love and could not spare any more time for that one.” He knows that living in the woods isn’t all there is in life. He won’t fall in like other people have, as in the whole greedy and complex lives. Having less of something is like having more of it. For example, the poor people have the more than what rich people have. The poor people just have what they need and nothing more unlike the rich. The rich are spoiled and get whatever they want and whenever they want. The poor keep their lives simple.
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Atlantic Essay Responses

Divine Soil by John Burroughs, River Driftwood by Sarah Orne Jewett, and Walking by Henry David Thoreau, were the three Atlantic articles I read.  In my perspective, I found it pretty interesting how 3 completely different authors were all able to write about Nature and expand on their thoughts on it but yet be able to give out the same connection in different ways.
Out of the three essays I read, Walking was my favorite because it liked how Thoreau made it clear that one shouldn’t go walking for exercise but instead to appreciate and enjoy nature. Thoreau’s idea of walking is for one “to lose themselves… in the woods.” After reading this certain essay, I reminded about the movie Into the Woods. Chris and Thoreau had very similar thoughts about nature and society. Thoreau says, "To enjoy a thing exclusively is commonly to exclude yourself from the true enjoyment of it." This is very similar to Chris’ idea of happiness being shared.
While Thoreau focused more on nature and the get away from society, Burroughs essay The Divine Soil is more about the supernatural and how it affects nature. I was somewhat confused about this essay because I wasn’t very clear on what he was trying to say. It was like he was just writing what he thought. First he talks about how, “[people] never learn,” and the goes on talking about heaven and technically how we don’t appreciate nature because we have brought the account that nature is, “too cheap, too common, and too vulgar.” Then he begins to talk about spiritual roots and how they connect with nature. Burroughs says that the spiritual root conceptions “[do] not cheapen or degrade the spiritual,” and instead it elevates the material. The issue with this is that he never says whether what he talks about is bad or a good.
Burroughs also mentions existence and how things are linked together with survival. He connects the food we eat with the thought we think, the poem we write, or the picture we paint with the processes of digestion and nutrition similar to River Driftwood, by Sarah Orne Jewett.  Jewett begins with the food chain. Every time that a prey is consumed the consumer becomes a higher part of the chain. She also gives the idea that, “we are not certain what an angel may be; but the life in us now will be necessary to the making of one by and by.” I also thought that she tried giving the idea that consumers don’t exactly appreciate what we eat and we become what is eaten.

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Wednesday, November 21, 2012

I am Thankful for...

It is that time of the year again when we all give thanks to what we are thankful for, Thanksgivings Day. I am thankful for having such good friends and an understanding and  coherent teacher in American Literature class. The two friends that I am most thankful for are Stephanie Biernat and Natalie Kieruzel. I can count on them with anything. If I ever need their helping on understanding something, I know that they can help me without getting annoyed. Mr. Locks, my American Literature teacher, is understandable with almost everything. I know that if I ever need more time with an assignment he’ll give me the time necessary for me to finish. Like everyone else should, I am thankful for what I am including my two friends and Mr. Locks. 

Monday, October 29, 2012

Community Short Story Essays

Here is New York

White begins with saying all these things about what New York isn't. White says that New York isn't like Paris or London or Spokane or Detroit. New York is supposedly not as common as other places are but it is very unique. New York managed to "reach the highest point in the sky" with the Empire State Building. It was a challenge for New York , knowing that it was on the deep Depression period. The Empire State Building made New York the loftiest of other cities. The beauty of New York has much to do with many of the problems that the city faces in daily life. It's what makes New York a very unique city. Traveling to New York may be fun but it doesn't mean that it'll be easy to get around. Most of the time travelers have problems getting from place to place. They can ride on the wrong subway or go to the opposite direction that they're heading towards. They might not even have sleep at nights due to the city noises on the streets. Travelers may even have embarrassing moments like not understanding a waiter. But all these bad, embarrassing things don't stop the travelers from having fun. They go visit places like the Statue of Liberty, St. Patrick's Cathedral, radio studios, and stores to at least window shop.
Travelers can have pretty amazing days at New York. New York may be beautiful in many ways but that doesn't mean that it doesn't have many problems. There is mass hysteria everyday in New York. For example, there are always stalled subways but somehow New York people manage to not be claustrophobic. There can always be panic situations  but people get lucky wisecracks. There's confusion and congestion but they maintain grit and patience. People usually use transportation such as taxis, buses and trains. Taking the wrong train can easily get you lost in a place as big as New York and asking a bus driver a small and simple question can get you slapped off the bus easily. It's not so easy to live in New York. There are many neighborhoods everywhere in New York. They are about 3 blocks by 3 blocks. That may seem small but it's really big once you think about it New York related. White refers to this as "city within a city within a city" because the neighborhoods are like actual cities in cities. First it's the actual city, then the neighborhood, and finally the block. Everything you needs is in reach no matter in which block you live in. Literally in every neighborhood you'll find grocery stores, laundry places, newsstands  moves houses, barber shops, and a lot more. Typically everything that you need is on your block or the one next to you. I can easily relate to New York because I myself like in a "city within a city within a city". I live in Chicago. Everything I need is right where i need them at. I have a corner store on the right side of my block, another corner store a block behind my house and another corner store on the block in front of me. If you count the corner stores within 3 by 3 of the blocks near my house, there are exactly 6 different corner stores. There also lots of small dollar stores, bakeries, 2 hair salons and more on the block in front of me. I don't have to walk anything more than 3 blocks to get what i need because it's all in reach.
(593)

                                                                                                                                                                                          

To be Young, Black and Gifted

I think that Hansberry made the best of what she had when she was growing up in Chicago. She knew that her neighborhood wasn't the richest neighborhood in Chicago. Her neighborhood was actually one of the poorest in the city. Hansberry explains to the reader how the homes in the south side of Chicago, where her neighborhood is at, were shabby. She explains how the back porches of her people could explain their tempo and the honesty of their lives in beneath the shabbiness of their back porches. The porches were scrubbed and sagging and "looked like danger." The porches had "dirty gray wood steps" and they always had "a line of white and pink clothes" that had been scrubbed and "waving in the dirty wind." While she grew up in Chicago, in the summers, her family and her would play in the streets and sleep at parks.
The summer days were some of her favorite days but something better than summer was her father. He was like a hero to her. Her father would tell her stories about how the starts came to be and how distant they were. She considered those days the best times of all. Her father was like a king, a king that would have other kings imitated. She thought that were father was always be doing something "brilliant and unusual." Her father knew all the laws of the State of Illinois and even had them in a booklet. He created pumps that were rather complicated and railroad devices and he would talk on and on about American history and private enterprise  He was very intelligent in her eyes. He made himself look as if he wasn't scared of anything that came his way. It made Lorraine think that he must have known about fear before, fear that made him strong.
Hansberry's family believed that no family member would be betrayed. Nothing was ever talked about love either. Her family was not very loving but yet they were passionate in their hostilities. They were a very proud family. Hansberry's familt was taught that there was never anything to difficult in life. The children in her family were taken care of, carefully nursed, and their aches were treated with urgency. Hansberry said that, "one always felt important in my family." She was the youngest in the family. She was seven years younger the the 2nd youngest. She said that the youngest was just an object toy. It's how she felt about being the youngest. She talks about how the youngest child is like a pest to everyone else in the family because before five years old the family members have to change diapers often and after 5 years old they have to take the child to the movies and to the bathroom. You become a nuisance and eventually learn to play alone.
At the end of the letter Hansberry describes her community as being represented as being a "hellishly hostile white neighborhood." Her people were spitted at and cursed at. They were pummeled while fighting supremacy in America.

Sunday, October 21, 2012

The Crucible Responce

The Crucible has finally came to an end. I thought the story in general was actually pretty interesting but weird at the same time just knowing how wicked their time period was. There were many confusing parts in the Crucible, especially because of all the dialogues by different people. All the different but yet same voices made it a bit difficult to understand who was saying who. After reading the book I feel like watching the movie to be able to relate on the difference of what happens in the book, or what i think happened, and what happens in the movie. 
I didn't enjoy the ending at all. Out of all the people that I thought would've died Proctor was the least of them all. I felt like the ending wasn't really the actual ending because it was just so sudden and not very detailed. I would've expect Abigail to die instead. I feel real bad for Proctor's family because after the baby is born it'll be an orphan shortly after. It makes me sad how innocent people got killed but I feel happy in a way because Proctor died with pride and death with pride is the best type of pride there is in my perspective.
I had predicted since act two that Proctor's adultery was going to come to light but i never expected him to be the one dying. I think Abigail won and i don't think she'll stop now even if Proctor is now dead. I defiantly think there should be a Crucible two where Abigail gets killed. In general. the Crucible had its boring parts but it was pretty crazy and I enjoyed reading it. (281)

Friday, October 19, 2012


Elsi Flores
10/15/12
6th period- Survey Lit.
Outline
In 1885, George Halas was born to Bohemian immigrants in Pilsen, in the south-side of Chicago. He attended school at the University of Chicago where he officially became associated with football. After graduating college he became a coach and an owner for a football team called the Staleys, now known as the Bears. He did things that no other coaches had ever done before. He gave himself inspiration, inspiration that didn't just inspire himself but inspiration that also inspired his team, football fans and even people that aren’t involved into any sports whatsoever. Halas, a member of the Hall of Fame, is an honor for the Bears and the NFL even now and days because of his coaching skills. He was committed to football and made football history, not just in school but history in America.
I.                   George Halas did things that no other coach had ever done before.
a.       He was the first coach in history to have everyday football practices. This kept his player in track and in the football mode and with daily practices, he had time to make corrections on his players. The practices never got old because he would always make the team do something different in practice to be able to improve their skills.
b.      Halas has been the only coach in history to film his team’s opponents’ games and use them for study. He would watch the videos and watch the moves and trick they did in order to improve his team’s skills.
c.       George was also the first to have his team be broadcasted on the radio. This helped his team become more known. People that heard the radio became more curious about who the Bears were and wondered if they were good. This got the Bears more fans and got them to become better known in Chicago.
II.                He wanted the best for his team and he did the best he could to keep his team successful.
a.       Halas was great motivator and leader. He would always think things thoroughly in short amount of time. He almost always knew what to do in sudden situations. He always had a plan B for every situation and thought about the future and about the things that could happen.
b.      He didn’t tolerate misbehavior, insubordination and especially not laziness. He had complete control over his team and over all their actions.
c.       Halas always expected the best from everyone in his team. The best was the standard in his watch. He always wanted his team to physically punish their opponents.
III.             Halas is known to make very inspirational quotes, quotes that he made up in order to inspire himself and his team into doing their best.
a.       The first quote he ever made was an inspiration for him at first but then dedicated to his team. His quote “nobody who ever gave his best, regretted it,” is even known now to motivate people into doing their best.
b.      A quote he used for his team was “don’t do anything in practice that you wouldn’t do in the game”. He made this quote to help his team stay focused in practicing and not wondering off into things they shouldn’t be doing. Halas took practice very seriously because he thought every minute to be very valuable.
c.       He would tell his team to “find out what the other team wants to do” and then to “take it away from them.” This refers to the opponents’ game films. They would watch what the enemy would do and use it against them. Other teams would call it a type of cheating but Halas thought of it as thinking ahead and being intelligent.




Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Rough Draft (not completed yet)

In 1885, George Halas was born to Bohemian immigrants in Pilsen, in the south-side of Chicago. He attended school at the University of Chicago where he officially became associated with football. After graduating college he became a coach and an owner for a football team called the Staleys, now known as the Bears. He did things that no other coaches had ever done before. He gave himself inspiration, inspiration that didn't just inspire himself but inspiration that also inspired his team, football fans and even people that aren't involved into any sports whatsoever. Halas, a member of the Hall of Fame, is an honor for the Bears and the NFL even now and days because of his coaching skills. He was committed to football and made football history, not just in school but history in America.
George Halas did things that no other coach had ever done before. He was the first coach in history to have everyday football practice sessions. These practices kept his players in track and in the football mode. With daily practices, he had time to watch each and every player do mistakes and help them improve on them to make the Bears stronger. The practices never got old because Halas would always make the team do something different in practice sessions every week to be able to improve their skills in everything. Halas has been the only coach in history to film his team’s opponents’ games and use them for study. He would watch the videos and observe the moves and tricks the opponents did in order to improve his team’s skills. George was also the first to have his team be broadcasted on the radio. By broadcasting his team, they become more known. People that heard the radio became more curious about who the Bears were and wondered about if they were good and how they played. This got the Bears more fans and got them to become better known in Chicago.
George always wanted the best for his team and he did the best he could to keep his team successful. He was a great motivator and leader. He would always think things thoroughly in short amounts of time. He almost always knew what to do in sudden situations. He always had a plan B for every situation and thought about the future and about the things that could happen. He didn't tolerate misbehavior, insubordination and especially not laziness. He had complete control over his team and over all their actions.  Halas always expected the best from everyone in his team. The best was the standard in his watch. He always wanted his team to physically punish their opponents.
Halas is known to make very inspirational quotes, quotes that he made up in order to inspire himself and his team into doing their best. The first quote he ever made was an inspiration for him at first but then dedicated to his team. His quote “nobody who ever gave his best, regretted it,” is even known now to motivate people into doing their best. A quote he used for his team was “don’t do anything in practice that you wouldn't do in the game”. He made this quote to help his team stay focused in the practice and not wonder off into things they shouldn't be doing. Halas took practice very seriously because he thought every minute to be very valuable.  He would tell his team to “find out what the other team wants to do” and then to “take it away from them.” This refers to the opponents’ game films. They would watch what the enemy would do and use it against them. Other teams would call it a type of cheating but Halas thought of it as thinking ahead and being intelligent.

Friday, October 12, 2012

The Crucible: Act III Response


There is so much drama going on at the moment. I love it right now. It's very intense. I think that the people of Salem are still very dumb though. How can they not know that they're pretending? It's pretty much common sense, but then again they are pretty freaked out about the witch situation. I find it very funny how Abigail is actually fooling mostly everyone in the court house with her lies. It’s ridiculous how Mary didn't confess all the lies that Abigail has done. I was expecting her to do it. Parris just gets worse by the act. In my opinion, he keeps getting more and more self-centered and cares too much about his reputation and less about others’ lives. I also find it interesting how Mary Warren can pretend to faint. I know I wouldn't be able to do that. I think Mary Warren is a bit like me when she’s in public and in the center of attention. We both get very nervous and cannot do the same things we can when we’re in less attention. (181)

Tuesday, October 9, 2012

tentative intro with thesis

In 1885, George Halas was born to Bohemian immigrants in Pilsen, in the south-side of Chicago. He attended school  at the University of Chicago where he officially became associated with football. After graduating college he became a coach and an owner for a football team called the Staleys. He did many things that no other coaches have done before, as well as doing things that were also done before. He gave himself inspiration , inspiration that didn't just inspire himself but also his team and even people today. Halas, a memeber of the Hall of Fame, is an honor for the Bears even now and days because of his coaching skills. He was committed to football and made football history, not just in school but history in America.

The Crucible: Act II Response


Everything is getting mixed up in act II. The way that people are accusing others is very dumb. It gets me pretty upset and frustrated how people accuse completely innocent and clueless people that don't even know how they became accused. Those poor innocent people might even get killed for no reasonable reason. I've never read the Crucible before so I'm predicting a couple of things from it. I think that Abigail is behind everything that's going on. I think that she made Mary make the doll and stick the needle in it and to give it to Elizabeth. I also think that Abigail stabbed herself with the needle on the same spot where the needle was on the doll so she could blame Elizabeth with witchcraft. The way that Elizabeth predicts that Abigail wants Proctor for herself, makes perfect sense to me. I would think the exact same if I was in her shoes, and I would most definitely not let Abigail win. I don't like people that want people that are taken; it's so frustrating and sinister, and threating with death is just evil. If anything I would think that Abigail is involved with witchcraft because she’s involved with lots of the bad things happening. I think that Abigail has something even worse coming up since Mary most likely will testify that she made the doll and stuck the needle in it. (234)

Monday, October 1, 2012

Fixed Thesis 10/03

Ever since George Halas, old coach of the Chicago Bears, was young he was very involved in sports, especially football. Halas, a memeber of the Hall of Fame, is an honor for the Bears even now and days because of his coaching skills.

thesis

Everyone has to start off from scratch in order to accomplish what one desires, and that's what George Halas did.

Saturday, September 29, 2012

Response to the Crucible

I thought that Act 1 of The Crucible was a bit confusing. I understand it is a big part of communism but the whole paradox part gets me off of my reading track. I don't like how Parris acts like he cares so much about Abigail and Betty. I'm not saying he doesn't because he does, but he's keeping it all a secret to keep his reputation clean. I don't like that type of people, the type that are selfish and mostly care about their future and not their families' future. I dislike Abigail a  lot more than Parris. She is all about lies and blaming things on other people about witchcraft. Where they live, there is no such thing as privacy. Someone says something and next thing you know everyone know. Salem is a very small community and people accuse each other a lot with lies. The biggest accusation is witchcraft. For me, it's very dumb how people believe others, knowing that rumors get around easily. I know that if i lived in that time period i would've moved somewhere where not so much drama happened and maybe even stay home most of the time.
(196)

Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Note Posts

1. The Staley Starch Works, of Decatur Illinois, lead George towards professional football.Many people don't know that many of the the good things existing in professional football, were introduced by George Halas. Of  the 54 people in the Pro Football Hall of Fame,in Canton, Ohio, Halas happened to have been one of them. George was an honor. For he was not only a coach but also a player, an executive dwarf and a club owner. (1)
2. On September 17, 1920, Halas couldn't afford to have a football team. Staley offered him $5,000 and told him to move to Chicago and in return for Halas' to keep his name for one more year.When Halas moved his team to Chicago he leased Wrigley Field from the owner of the Chicago Cubs baseball team, Bill Veeck. So starting in 1922, the Bears were officially renamed and born. The Bears was an ideal name coming from the idea of the Cubs baseball field. (1)
3. For Halas' first ten years of coaching, he wasn't just a coach but also a player. Within those ten years, George's team won 321 times, tied 31 times, and lost 141 times. Halas retired 4 times as being a Bears coach. He retired on the 1929, 1942 (due to the fact that he participated in the World War II), 1955, and at age 73. Every time he went back to coach, he was a new Halas. After Halas finally retired from being a coach for the Bears in 1968, he didn't completely stop being associated with football. He stayed being a consultant for the team.  (1)
4. George Halas was a larger-than-life football legend as well as a member of the Pro Football Hall of Fame. He was a player and a football coach. In December 17, 2011, Halas was honored in his old high school, Crane Technical High School, by the Hall of Fame and the Allstate insurance. (2)
5. Mark LaNeve, the Allstate executive vice president, said that, "to be part of a program that brings the prestige and tradition of the Pro Football Hall of Fame to communities like Chicago is an honor for Allstate, our agents and employees" (Halas remembered at Chicago high school). George Halas was and still is, a great inspiration for the Chicago Bears and the NFL. (2)
6. Halas was known as "Papa Bear" because of his association with the Chicago Bears. Halas coached the Bears for 40 seasons, in which the Chicago Bears won six NFL championships, 324 wins and 318 season victories. Being a coach, Halas was a great motivator and leader. Because of George  the Bears have the most amount of player in the Professional Football Hall of Fame. (2)
7. George was the founder, owner, and coach of the Chicago Bears. He was said to be "Mr. Everything" of Professional Football. He was typically associated with the Bears since 1920 till a couple of years before he died on October 31, 1983, 88 years of age. He represented the Bears, originally known as the Decatur Staleys, at the NFL's organizational meeting. (3)
8. George was first in many things associated with football. He was first to hold practice sessions that took place every day, the first to use films taken of the opponents' games (used for study), the first to make meetings for brainstorming tours and the first to have his football team be broadcasting on radio. (3)
9. He didn't tolerate with misbehavior, laziness or insubordination. He expected his team to work to their fullest and punish their opponents physically. While Halas was the Bears' coach, they were known as the "Monsters of the Midway" because they had won 6 championship leagues. (6)
10. George halas first got involved in football when he went to school at the University of Illinois. He began to participate in football then, and finally stopped being associated with coaching it on 1968 when he was 73 years old, 10 years before he passed away. (4)
11.  Halas set then stages for now-a-days football offenses by including a man-in-motion to the classic, and well know, T Formation. Halas had gotten this idea from Clark Shaughnessy, an american football coach. This offense formation was used to become a power house. The Bears beat the Washington Redskins in 1940, by using the T Formation, and won 73-0, which is the greatest victory in league history today. (4)
12. Halas played on his team till 1929. The Chicago Bears' 324 wins stayed as being a record till 1963. It is also said that they were named the Bears because football players are larger than baseball players. George Halas was the oldest coach in all of league history. (10)
13. George Halas was born in Pilsen to Bohemian parents. He was born on February 2, 1895 and was taught self-discipline, frugality and business smarts by his family. In U of C he didn't just play football but also baseball and basketball. He was mostly into baseball at first but while being on the Yankees team he severely injured his hip and his baseball career ended. He promised his mother that he was done with sports for the rest of his life. He didn't keep his promise and snuck off on the weekends to play football in club teams. (5)
14. Halas was recommended by contacts of Illinois. He was based on the reputation organized by the military service sports teams. That was when in 1920, he received the call from Staley Starch Works. Staley's company wanted Halas to relocate himself to Illinois so that he could work for the company and organize, as well as coach football and baseball teams. He took the offer. (5)
15. Staley typically gave Halas the $5,000 to get his team started in Chicago. After the season that George promised (keeping the team's name, Staley Decaturs , the Staleys were renamed to the Bears as in honor of the Cubs. (5)
16. Halas was not alone when he first moved to Chicago with his team. He had a partner named DUtch Sternamen. He helped George come up with the name for the Bears. Before the NFL was called the NFL it was called the American Professorial Football Association, APFA. After renaming the Bears, he came up with the idea of naming the APFA, N FL and other owners agreed with him. (6)
17. After Halas retired from being a player for the Bears, he hired Ralph Jones as the Bears' coach for 3 seasons. They lost lots of money because of the depression years. Hence, George took over again in 1933. He said, "I came cheap." (6)
18. When Halas isn't on the field he is a very "quiet and soft-spoken" person, but when he's on the field he is very violent. He is considered to be a hero. When he isn't engrossed with the Bears, he acted like a president of a small-town banker (7)
19. When Halas was a player, he used to kick field goals,squirm away from tacklers and throw blocks. And while he was being coach he would always be running back and up the sidelines and yelling at officials. Chicago Bears fans loved to watch him play and coach. There's even less booing when George Halas plays and coaches. (7)
20. "He was a lot tougher before," Luckman says. "But don't get me wrong. I don't think there's a Bear who ever played for Halas who doesn't have the deepest respect and admiration for him. You knew he would stick by you. He was like a father to me. I can truthfully say that all I am today I owe to George Halas and the Bears." Luckman ended up being a successful Chicago businessman. (7)
21. Halas was very strict and full od discipline in the outside but in thee inside he had warmth seeping though. He even made count in his team. He wanted a certin weight for all of the team members. He explained that, "it's like handicapping a horse. A 2-pound up in weight means difference in speed. I figure five extra pounds on a 190-pound halfback is the difference between a good and a great player." (8)
22. In general while Halas was coaching the Bears, they won 324 victories. He was the owner of the Chicago Bears for over 60 years. He coached them more than forty years. Halas also played on the team for  ten years. (9)
23. Halas' parents' names were Frank and Barbara Halas. His parents immigrated to Pilsen in  the 1880's and that is how he ended up being born in Pilsen. It's a coincidence how on the year Halas was born, 1895, was the year the first professional football game took action in history. (9)
24. Halas may have seemed very tough, enthusiastic and bossy but when he was in college he was almost always over powered by people larger than him. He was six feet tall and 170 pounds. His college coaches had to always be aware of his shortcomings since he has broken his jaw and a leg during his sophomore and junior years. (9)
25. George won lots of awards about football. He won the American Professional Football Association Championship in 1921. He won the first National League title game in 1933. In 1940-1941, he won the NFL Championship. In 1963, he was named as the NFL Coach of the Year and added to Pro Football Hall of Fame and on 1965, he was named the NFL Coach of the Year again. Finally in 1997, a stamp was issued in the honor for Halas' retirement. In 1999 the Sporting News named Halas to be one of "The Most Powerful People In Sports For The 20th Century." He will forever be known as "Papa Bear" (8)
26. Halas and Minnie Bushing got married on February 18, 1922. Minnie passed away after 44 years of marriage on 1966 on Valentine's Day. They had 2 children, George S Halas Jr. and Virginia Marion McCaskey. They both became involved with the football league in their adulthood. (8)
27. The Chicago Bears team officially began on  1920 named as the Decatur Staleys. They were sponsored by the A.E. Staley Company, which is a starch manufacturer. The Staleys first recruited college players, like Halas, and employees to help make the American Pro Football Association, became NFL in 1922. (11)
28. In 1921, which was the one of the years of the depression, a business recession cut the starch profits. That was when and why Staley told Halas to go to Chicago along with his team. (11)
29. On 1925, Halas signed the University of Illinois star senior Harold “Red” Grange after the college football season had finished. Both the Grange and the Bears played the Chicago Cardinals. The score was a tie and it had drawn 36,000 people, the largest amount of people the league had drawn. The Bears played eight games in less than 2 weeks. They played in Chicago, Philadelphia, New York City, St. Louis Washington, Detroit, and Boston. When the Bears played against the Giants in New York City, they drew 73,000 people. After then, the Bears played another nine games towards the South and West, including the game at Los Angeles Coliseum, which drew 75,000 people. (11)
30. Halas' birth was and is very important to football. He played an important role in the success of the Bears and the NFL in general. His signing on Red Grange attracted more an attention of more than 75,000 people to the league. Coaching wasn't all he did. He also introduced different things to the game as announcement systems, radio broadcasts that were public and he was one of the Pro Football Hall of Fame members. (12)
31. It is said that George even took care of selling the game day tickets. When people asked him why he quit or retired from coaching, he would respond saying that he "was too slow to run up and down the sidelines to chew out the refs". He was known as the NFL foulest mouth.(13)
32. Halas was the first coach ever to put assistant coaches to keep a perspective watch during the game. He was known to be generous because once he  helped send one of his players to dental college. When his player, Brian Piccolo, came back from his college years, he was diagnosed with cancer. George paid th entire medical expenses. Halas himself had cancer. He had been diagnosed with pancreatic cancer but he chose to keep it a secret. (13)
33. George Halas new his death was near, so right before he passed away he bought a bottle of champagne and attached a note that said "TO MIKE, FOR WINNING THE SUPER BOWL." in 1985, when George finally died, the Bears gave Mike Ditka, the last coach Halas hired,  the champagne bottle and he cried in the memory of "Papa Bear". (13)
34. Halas was also the first coach to have assistant coaches in press boxes and the first coach to motion athletes before the plays started. He was strict in disciplinary and maintained complete control over his team and their operations. (22)
35. Halas is known as the "Father of Football" because football wouldn't be what it is today without any of this contributions. The NFC Championship trophy has his name. The sleeves of the Bears jerseys have the initials of "GHS", which stand for George Staley Halas. Today, the Bears training facility is named the Halas Hall in the memory of Halas. (22)

Friday, September 21, 2012

Bibliographies


1              "Bears in The Hall." Chicago. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Sept. 2012. <http://www.chicagobears.com/tradition/bears-in-the-hall/george-halas.html>.
Football Career as a coach and retirement

2              "News Article." Â» Halas Remembered at Chicago High School. N.p., 07 Dec. 2011. Web. 19 Sept. 2012. <http://www.profootballhof.com/story/2011/12/7/halas-remembered-at-chicago-high-school/>.
Inspiration to the Chicago Bears and NFL

3              "Hall of Famers." Â» GEORGE HALAS. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Sept. 2012. <http://www.profootballhof.com/hof/member.aspx?PlayerId=85>.
Winning 6 NFL and doing many things no other coach has done before

4              "George Halas, Papa Bear, NFL Founder, Chicago Bears, Sports Heroes, Real Men,Manlyweb.com." George Halas, Papa Bear, NFL Founder, Chicago Bears, Sports Heroes, Real Men, Manlyweb.comManlyweb.com, n.d. Web. 19 Sept. 2012. <http://www.manlyweb.com/realmen/sports/GeorgeHalas.html>.
Named Papa Bear

5              Taylor, Roy. "George S. Halas Biography." George S. Halas Biography. N.p., 2007. Web. 19 Sept. ­2012. <http://www.bearshistory.com/lore/georgehalas.aspx>.
Recommended by contacts of Illinois
6              Hickok, Ralph. "Sports Biographies." HickokSports.com. N.p., 18 Feb. 2009. Web. 24 Sept. 2012. <http://www.hickoksports.com/biograph/halasgeorge.shtml>.
Halas' type of coaching
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Describing George, what he looks like but how he really is
8              Kirshenbaum, Jerry. "Scorecard." - 11.14.83. N.p., 14 Nov. 1983. Web. 24 Sept. 2012. <http://sportsillustrated.cnn.com/vault/article/magazine/MAG1135885/index.htm>.
George Halas was the "father of pro football"
9              Cooksey, Gloria. "Halas, George.Notable Sports Figures. 2004.Encyclopedia.com. 24 Sep. 2012 <http://www.encyclopedia.com/doc/1G2-3407900227.html>.
Gerorge's timeline of important events in his life
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Starting to play football at a very young age
11              "Bears." Bears. The Electronic Encyclopedia of Chicago, n.d. Web. 01 Oct. 2012. <http://encyclopedia.chicagohistory.org/pages/121.html>.
History of the Bears, from beginning of Halas till Halas his death. 
12              "Halas, George.Encyclopædia BritannicaEncyclopædia Britannica Online School EditionEncyclopædia Britannica, Inc., 2012. Web. 1 Oct. 2012.
<http://school.eb.com/eb/article-9038849>.
His growth of success and his retirement. 
13               "Papa Bear George Halas." Legacy.com. N.p., 02 Feb. 2011. Web. 01 Oct. 2012. <http://www.legacy.com/ns/news-story.aspx?t=papa-bear-george-halas&id=237>.
Halas was very strict but yet a joker, descriptions of how he was.
14              "George Halas." Baseball-Reference.com. N.p., n.d. Web. 01 Oct. 2012. <http://www.baseball-reference.com/players/h/halasge01.shtml>.
Dates, when he stopped playing baseball.
15              "George Halas - Celebrity Information." George Halas - Celebrity Information. Mystic Games, n.d. Web. 03 Oct. 2012. <http://www.mysticgames.com/famouspeople/GeorgeHalas.htm>.
His so called, legend of selling tickets for his team.
16              "Top 10 List - Famous George Halas Quotescolor=darkblue." Famous George Halas Quotes Top 10 List. Great Quotes By George Halas. Inspirational-quotes-and-quotations.com, n.d. Web. 03 Oct. 2012. <http://www.inspirational-quotes-and-quotations.com/famous-george-halas-quotes.html>.
George Halas' quotes.
17              "Research Halas, George "Papa Bear" (1895-1983)." BookRags. BookRags, n.d. Web. 03 Oct. 2012. <http://www.bookrags.com/research/halas-george-papa-bear-1895-1983-sjpc-02/>.
Halas was the first president of the National Football Conference.
18              McCoppin, Robert. "Halas His Iron Hold on the Team He Founded Set the Stage for the Chicago Bears' Downfall, a New Bio Contends." Daily Herald (Arlington Heights, IL) 4 Nov. 2004: 1. Questia School. Web. 4 Oct. 2012.
Growing up with playing baseball and football.
19              Pollack, Joe. "NFL Coaches Have Become Corporate Powers." St. Louis Journalism Review Oct. 1997: 9. Questia School. Web. 4 Oct. 2012.
Having a strong voice and being a good coach.
20              "Opening-General Session Keynote Speakers Carlson vs. Carlson and Don Shula. (132Nd Congress of Correction)." Corrections Today 1 Aug. 2002: 32. Questia School. Web. 4 Oct. 2012.
Halas and another coach were the only ones yet to have gotten 300 victories.
21              "Clark Shaughnessy." Pro-Football-Reference.com. Pro-Football-Reference.com, n.d. Web. 08 Oct. 2012. http://www.pro-football-reference.com/coaches/ShauCl0.html.
Bibliography of Halas' partner.
22               "Funk, David. "Chicago Bears." Bleacher Report. Bleacher Report, 31 Oct. 2008. Web. 15 Oct. 2012. <http://bleacherreport.com/articles/75980-papa-bear-george-halas-documentary>.
George facts and how he impacted the Bears and football.
23                25, December. "This New Formation Fit Stanford's Team of 1940 to a 'T' : College Football: With Shaughnessy's Innovative Offense, the Indians, Who Won One Game in 1939, Went Undefeated and Beat Nebraska in the Rose Bowl." Los Angeles Times. Los Angeles Times, 25 Dec. 1990. Web. 21 Oct. 2012. <http://articles.latimes.com/1990-12-25/sports/sp-7207_1_college-football>.
College atheletes doing the T-formation
24               "History: Shotgun Formation." History: Shotgun Formation. Pro Football Hall of Fame, n.d. Web. 21 Oct. 2012. <http://www.profootballhof.com/history/decades/1960s/shotgun.aspx>.
introduction of the shotgun formation.